excellent, very amusing. i agree with john's comment abut the first person paragraph. and also i'm a bit confused with how tatya thinks it's a very good idea to try to fit in in one graph but two graphs later is dead set against it .
twas a very enjoyable read and i loved loved loved his difficulties with the kippers. ha!
Good stories, the kippers and the turban. Soothingly comic. There is a paragraph in the middle where someone thinks in the first person, which is confusing..."My father would say things like that as he took meetings with Persian, Belgian, and British businessmen. . . " Otherwise great!
excellent, very amusing. i agree with john's comment abut the first person paragraph. and also i'm a bit confused with how tatya thinks it's a very good idea to try to fit in in one graph but two graphs later is dead set against it .
twas a very enjoyable read and i loved loved loved his difficulties with the kippers. ha!
Good stories, the kippers and the turban. Soothingly comic. There is a paragraph in the middle where someone thinks in the first person, which is confusing..."My father would say things like that as he took meetings with Persian, Belgian, and British businessmen. . . " Otherwise great!